Architect Application

[tmcgillicuddy]

The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect/Artist
My Game Name is: Tmcgillicuddy
My Project is called: Empire State Building
To get to my project: /warp Empire
A brief description of my project: The Empire State Building on Manhattan NY. It includes a lobby with a ticket booth and information desk on the first floor. On the second floor are the offices (considering it IS an office building) including cubicles and 4 high position offices. The 3rd floor is a gift shop including a food court, jewelry shop, music boxes, a book store and photographs. The top floor is an observation deck from the top of the building. I apologize in advance if there is any snow. I built the whole building and all the floors except for one floor where Steezier's secret base is; it is filled with snowmen. The only help I got was from a tutorial on youtube. I ONLY used it for the 5 blocks up from the ground. This was just to get an idea about the size. The rest was my design. I do not know how to put an item on diplay, and that is what the wooden planks in the gift shop are for. When I can/ figure out how to I will put the items there that are in the corresponding chests.
Mandatory Screenshots

[tmcgillicuddy]

I know that the inside is kinda normal. My main focus was on the building itself. I just did not want to leave the inside empty

[tmcgillicuddy]

http://www.mxpulse.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=1319

Main focus was on the building itself, didn't want to leave it empty though.

[Hid101]

im pretty they are not going to rate it because u didnt use the format which is found here: http://mxpulse.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=1094

[tmcgillicuddy]

I did...it was just easier to send a link to it (still on this website)

[Pri]

It isn't architect worthy. There just isn't enough detail inside of the building and you built it in flat so there hasn't been a lot of work put in to the surrounding area making it fit in.

To get architect you really need to think about not just the building itself but having it fit in with the surrounding area, maybe even some terraforming for hills and such. This just looks like a building in the middle of nowhere it doesn't look good.

Threads merged

[tmcgillicuddy]

Ok, thanks...I will work on an environment for it (probably NYC city street) to place around it

[Hid101]

Tmc dont get down because pri said he wouldnt give it to u, i applied for arch 3 times and got it on the 3rd, take the comments he gave u and use those to your advantage, its wat i did