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Mr43Gym
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arch App

Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:30 am

I'm applying for: Architect

Project Name: Build Arena

How do we get there?: Type: /warp flat: and then look around for a big glass tank

Brief Description: A building competition Arena

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Anything we might miss when we see it in game?: Not much...it is realy big


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delicatedahlias
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Re: arch App

Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:54 am

Thanks for giving me the chance to rate your build :D

Uniqueness on our server: Does it look like something already built?
1 = Not unique, 10 = Very very unique
*3* A building contest is a fun and good idea, but we already have two contest arenas on our server and official monthly contests. Both of the aforementioned areas are quite a bit larger and more detailed than this build.


Beauty: Does it look nice to look at?
1 = Ugly, 10 = Really really beautiful
*2* Let me start my saying that it is clear you put a lot of work into it, especially the glass. The overall layout is fine. It is far to gimmicky. There is a lot of fire and a lot of glowstone, making it hard to look at. The red and blue halves are good, but the letters in them need some work. Also, the signs are confusing.

Execution: Is it well made, are corridors and rooms built to the correct sizing?
1 = Built by Refugees, 10 = Built by Master Craftsmen
*4* The arena is very tall but not as wide, meaning the space is not as well utilized as it could be. However, I like the size and feel of the small info center. The passageways are too narrow.


Scale: The larger and more grand the build is the higher it scores
1 = Golf-Ball Size Settlement, 10 = Entire City

*3* It is large for the amount of time you have been with us and clearly you work fast. However, it is fairly small to medium sized compared to all of the builds on the server, and I think you could do more with it if you spent more time on it.


3+2+4+3= 12

Sorry, you do not rank up this time, but please keep going! You have good ideas and just need to be a little more patient
:D
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Re: arch App

Tue Jan 17, 2012 1:38 pm

Deli, you're so sexy with your purple text.
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Re: arch App

Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:11 pm

alexcarlson wrote:Deli, you're so sexy with your purple text.
The last thing we need is ANOTHER sexual harassment lawsuit.

Just kidding :(

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