SirDuCkZ Artist rank app

[DuCkZ]

The Rank I'm applying for is: Artist
My Game Name is: SirDuCkZ
My Project is: Youtube
To get to my project: The Rank I'm applying for is: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qUsrHnpHBZQ
A brief description of my project: A youtube video of me and TheJRandom on are journey to get the obsidian pickaxe

[freakboy31]

Your application is rated 30 points by Pri, congratulations Since I don't have the ability to promote you to Artist, you have to wait for an Admin to do that. I mean, 30 points is Artist rank requirement.

[Pri]

I have not rated this, I don't know what you're talking about freakboy lol

Beauty: 3/10
Execution: 4/10
Length: 10/10
Representation: 6/10

It's not really a beautiful film and it has some quality issues in the filming, your voice over doesn't come through that clear, it's hard to find beauty when most of the film is just mining with a song playing over the top, it's not going to score highly for these reasons.

My tips with regards to beauty and execution:
1. Film at 1080p with 60 FPS, you may need a better graphics cards for this
2. Get a better microphone and a windshield for it, this will make the sound much much better.
3. Consider taking out some monotonous tasks, viewers get bored quickly and more than 30 seconds of mining it's tideus.

The length it's 10/10 because it scored 1 point per 30 seconds, I don't have an issue with the length but as I said above the mining was tideus and that made up most of the films length.

Finally the representation, I think perhaps a screenshot of our website or server logo or even the shop page showing the Obsidian Pickaxe crafting graphics would have really enhanced this video and represented the server a bit more. I personally would have overlayed the pickaxe crafting section from the shop at the beginning when you were discussing the Pickaxe that you're working towards as it's a bit tough for someone not familiar with our server to understand what you're working towards without that visual.

So total points, 23. This isn't enough for Artist (30 Points) but I think you're learning how to make films and you are obviously passionate about it. I hope you take my feedback here and that it'll assist you in your future videos, I welcome you to submit another video in 7 days from now