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[jackerdelta]

The Rank I'm applying for is: Legendary Crafter
My Game Name is: Jackerdelta
My Project is called: The city of Apotheosis
To get to my project: /warp JackerdeltaApp
A brief description of my project: Apotheosis was founded by a King in hopes of isolating himself and his people from the dangers of the outside. In his little paradise, dubbed "Apotheosis", he hoped to advance his community more than any other country in the world, for that time. As he only had so much space, he had to resort to thinking of ways to maximize productivity, and increase space between residents. He knew that to maximize space for the workers on the floor, he'd have to build houses on the ceiling. Each house represents someone who plays a major role, and each role the person played is represented via the theme of the interior. For example, in one house you might find a floor with notes on how this person made a redstone repeaters, additionally, you might find a house with lots of chests and labeled chests for building resources, this person might be a builder who helped build the city.
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[TheJRandom]

Jack you build some amazing stuff dude, good luck!!

[GeneralVenican]

This is amazing! Good luck

[Pri]

Beauty: 7/10
Execution: 6/10
Uniqueness: 9/10
Scale: 10/10

Total: 32 points.

The reason it scored 7 on beauty is although its nice the randomization of blocks to add detail is starting to degrade the quality of your builds and it looks messy. Same reason execution is low, inside these houses theres like 10 furnaces in the walls place randomly, there's no way to get from the houses without flying it's just not really well thought out.

The reason the uniqueness score is quite high is because this is a unique build with the houses hanging from the ceiling. That's great I think it's an excellent concept.

Scale, obviously this is a 10/10 build, very large. But it was done on creative so you're going to have to do a bit better than this for a higher rating.

I'd recommend coming up with a pattern for your buildings instead of randomising blocks that would help to bring the beauty up. And then work out some way to move between the homes or even to get in them in the first place. Perhaps bridges between the homes or something and that'll raise the execution.

[Psico45]

What's the story behind the town that you built?