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Architect Application. joethebro46
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joethebro46
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Architect Application. joethebro46
Hey ive recently been building on this server and i thought about trying to get a rank, so look at what i have built. Ive messed up the slide please start at the bottom .
moved to the proper forum~ Riven
.moved to the proper forum~ Riven
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- And a beautiful view
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- Another picture of the guard tower
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- A nice window to watch you town while chillin
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- And a snazzy place for the king to live in, it isnt quite done actually
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- To guard your citizens your gunna need guard towers
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- In a town you need pathways, otherwise you wouldnt know where your going
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- And a soon to be residential area
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- And even more farm houses to make more food
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- And some storage space for that food we will have
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- A farm house for all the food the Town will need is a priority
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GrayTheMudkip
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"Everyone want's happiness no one wants pain but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain"
Re: Architect Application. joethebro46
Joe the correct area for this is the Minecraft Rank Application.
http://www.mxpulse.com/board/viewforum.php?f=36
http://www.mxpulse.com/board/viewforum.php?f=36
"Everyone want's happiness no one wants pain but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain"
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Riven
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Re: Architect Application. joethebro46
ok, first things first. this needs to be in the proper format. which can be found Here
ok, after seeing this ingame
Uniqueness:4
its the beginings of a town which are not very hard to find
Beauty:4
im conflicted on this part because you had a few very nice interiors but most of it is rather awkward.
Execution:4
there were holes and gaps everywhere. the windows dont line up and gaps above doors and there was a large amount of half holes in the paths and floors
Scale:4
based on whats done now, i can see future stuff laid out but gotta rate on whats there now
the total is 16 points which gets you apprentice but not architect.
focus on making things work better. what killed you here was the gaps and holes and things not lining up. your also gonna need to work on the detail in most of your rooms. youve got 1 or 2 great interiors but the rest are empty
ok, after seeing this ingame
Uniqueness:4
its the beginings of a town which are not very hard to find
Beauty:4
im conflicted on this part because you had a few very nice interiors but most of it is rather awkward.
Execution:4
there were holes and gaps everywhere. the windows dont line up and gaps above doors and there was a large amount of half holes in the paths and floors
Scale:4
based on whats done now, i can see future stuff laid out but gotta rate on whats there now
the total is 16 points which gets you apprentice but not architect.
focus on making things work better. what killed you here was the gaps and holes and things not lining up. your also gonna need to work on the detail in most of your rooms. youve got 1 or 2 great interiors but the rest are empty
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