the rank im applying for is architect
my game name is xlreight777
my project is called medieval castle
to get to my project go to x:-9953 y: 81 z: -2258 in the creative world ( note : you will be teleported inside my build)
my build is a large castle including 3 towers one big one medium in comparison to the build,large walls built into the build and a large building.
oh and by the way sorry for the images at night , ill do them during the day next time
xlreight777's architect application
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Re: xlreight777's architect application
Uniqueness: (3) Castles tend to get done alot, that said i wouldnt call this a castle, at best a fortified manor but prob closer to a fortified outpost
Beauty: (6) it does look somewhat nice. to me its over crowded and looks cramped. this would go up if it was just a bit more spread out
Execution: (4) you said this was a castle but all i found was 2 throne rooms and some storage that isnt even accessible. one of the ladders in the tower you have to fly off of because the surrounding blocks are too high and most of the chests cant be opened. also your missing some basic rooms, such as a bedroom, armory, barracks or meal hall. also the inside is not very detailed at all
Scale: (5) for an architect build this is on the smaller end but not impossible.
overall i give this a 18 out of the 30 needed.
my advice would be to expand this and make it bigger. my biggest problem is the lack of detail and functionality, which requires more space. i think this build has potential but as is it isnt ready.
Beauty: (6) it does look somewhat nice. to me its over crowded and looks cramped. this would go up if it was just a bit more spread out
Execution: (4) you said this was a castle but all i found was 2 throne rooms and some storage that isnt even accessible. one of the ladders in the tower you have to fly off of because the surrounding blocks are too high and most of the chests cant be opened. also your missing some basic rooms, such as a bedroom, armory, barracks or meal hall. also the inside is not very detailed at all
Scale: (5) for an architect build this is on the smaller end but not impossible.
overall i give this a 18 out of the 30 needed.
my advice would be to expand this and make it bigger. my biggest problem is the lack of detail and functionality, which requires more space. i think this build has potential but as is it isnt ready.

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