esesriver's architect build 2 (improved)

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esesriver's architect build 2 (improved)

Tue Feb 11, 2014 10:49 am

:D What rank i am applying for: Architect
In game name: esesriver
Building's name: Raven's Temple
Do /warp esesarch to get to the temple in server creative
This is an old temple that is left here by the sky domers 300 years ago
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Re: esesriver's architect build 2 (improved)

Tue Feb 11, 2014 11:25 am

Pretty cool!
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Re: esesriver's architect build 2 (improved)

Tue Feb 11, 2014 6:37 pm

It Still stands on what I said before Ese. Also you need 3 mandatory screenshots Like different angles . Try doing one during the day as well. There is something rather large casting a shadow in the front. Tree's are great filler's but don't make a build, Less of course they are custom hand placed leaf by leaf tree's. I am assuming the under top is still not completed with design and have yet to see the sides or back of the build.

I am not trying to be a hard ass here Ese but I know you have amazing building capability. But as for Arch rank this build still isn't up to par yet. I mean just look at the changes you made to the front it made it look 100x better. But it needs Structure.
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Re: esesriver's architect build 2 (improved)

Wed Feb 12, 2014 1:42 pm

This is worth Apprentice, but too far from Architect to be honest.
I have to be really honest. This kind of build not really worth it comparing to our past applications which they look astonishing.

It's about time to set a border between better Architect-worthy builds than some of these.


Why not give a shot on crafting a pixel-art for Artist? or better, a 3D model of something other than Minecraft model?
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