dennsva's architect application

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dennsva
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dennsva's architect application

Sun Feb 02, 2014 4:05 pm

Hi everyone! This is my (first) architect application, please post/say ingame any opinions!
Special thanks to:
Mae who gave me an axe to get rid of the forest
Kotkankatse who helped me build a bit

The Rank I'm applying for is: architect
My Game Name is: dennsva
My Project is called: A mansion
To get to my project: ask me ingame
A brief description of my project: Its a mansion i built for myself to live in.
Three mandatory screenshots:

Sorry for the arrow that is in the wall, I didnt notice it earlier
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My storage room
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The lobby
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Outside at night
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Stephanie
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Re: dennsva's architect application

Sun Feb 09, 2014 6:00 am

Before I give my opinion on this I need to see the screenshots in the day time and a overall view of the landscape.

What I think though from these screen shots is the lights stand out to much they are to big for the room and hang to low to the ground, Although I do like the way they look just not for the room they are in.

The landscaping looks very plain from these screenshots and there is no showing of any detail of room decorations , entrance ways, Did you decorate the inside?

All these things matter when applying for a Arch App.
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RamboNol
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Re: dennsva's architect application

Sun Feb 09, 2014 6:11 am

From what the screenshots show it is quite blank and empty and lacks detail on the outside other than the house itself. Add landscaping and some more stuff on the inside. If that doesn't get it then add some more buildings with a nice path connecting them.
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