Evohluxx's Re:application for architect

[Evohluxx]

In game name: Evohluxx
Project: Serenity
Desc:my town serenity i have put hard work intoi got apprentice on my last application but left out a few of my builds along with townmates that might sway your opinion along with horse stable buisness tower and a monument (maybe to pri?)
how to get to serenity:
/town spawn serenity (mod+ only)
/tpa evohluxx
or on dynamap blue flag serenity
Note: i did have help on the builds but these builds were my idea and i put most of work into them.

[Psico45]

Uniqueness: 6
Skyscrapers aren't very unique to this server however the other two structures are somewhat interesting. The third one for sure, the second one is just an altered cube.

Beauty: 4
There's not much beauty for these builds because while the third one does look interesting they all seem hollow, Especially the second one which we can clearly see it is.

Execution: 5
While they are big, they lack some details that would make for the builds to look good. Perhaps a bit Rushed.

Scale: 7
They are fairly big, and counting the surrounding town it has quite the considerable size.

6+4+5+7 = 22 Which puts you at apprentice Still


Try going for more details for the structures and find a way to properly display them that makes them look natural. For example the second one. Try adding a bit of land around it, enough to make it look natural and not a floating cobble square

[Evohluxx]

for the 2nd one i uploaded thewron photo thats while it is hollow and im still making the dual room hallway and i need an idea for a statue

[Psico45]

Indeed, I'm not saying you can't make it, you're very close to it be sure to add those things that you mentioned!

Keep up the good work!

[Evohluxx]

thanks psi im wondering ifi could get some tips?
or help

[Evohluxx]

pri if u see this message i messed up this one with diffferent screen shots and i left out a couple so im going to resumbit one when i finish up in a couple of days. im working hard for it

[Psico45]

Be sure to do so Evo