My (JVRenz) Coaster/ rank application

[JV12345]

Hi, my name is JVRenz
you probebley remember me for being on the renegades ALL the time. Latley, i made a huge,fun project everyone LOVES! Heres my application.......

The rank i want to get: architect
My name: JVRenz
My project is called: The HO' SH*T COASTER!
To see and get my coaster: Vistit the flat land in the creative renegades and head away from spawn to a huge, big walled city
A Brief description: The "HO' SH*T'" coaster was just a fun idea i had one day and day by day i worked on it. the coaster features underground tunnels, twists and turns and fireworks at the end.
Sceen shots: In attachments

I hope you read about and saw my coaster and i hope you think about making me the rank of architect.
-Thank you JVRenz

[snapplesauce123]

Can you give the coordinates, so I can see it fo' real

[JV12345]

i'll have the coordinates up soon,sorry.

[Jayman0101]

I set a warp for him:
/warp JVCastle

[Pri]

Thank you for the warp. I checked out the coaster today and I do have some constructive input. But before I get in to that I'm going to be rating this Apprentice.

Now the coaster had some interesting parts I liked the many jumps and how long the coaster was. I also enjoyed the fireworks at the end and the many tunnels and dispensers. But I did not enjoy the downward spiral around the gold block pillar. Frankly that section made me feel physically sick. It was very disorientating and annoying. But even if that wasn't in there, this wouldn't earn Architect because it's just not creative enough for that.

But you did earn Apprentice which means you're on your way there. I checked a few of the buildings within the area and I noticed you built quite a few of those. My advice with regards to these is work on your building exteriors and roofs. Almost all the things that you had built look liked very large basic cubes. You really need to add some more creative flair to the externals to get an Architect rank.

Congrats on Apprentice I'm sure if you apply yourself you can get Architect.

[JV12345]

Thank you! and i will work on my village to get it where i can get the rank of architect.