themizjr architect application

[themizjr]

The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect
My Game Name is: themizjr
My Project is called: Shipwreck
To get to my project:ask me ingame
A brief description of my project:A guy who crashed on an island and tries to get home.
Three mandatory screenshots:

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[Stephanie]

I like where this is going but for the rank you are applying for you will need to go a little bit bigger with the builds also your really on point with the details I would expect to see from a ship wreck site. Just the Scale is off for a Architect Rank. My Suggestion to you for this build is think of my Aspects you would see on a ship wrecked Island, and make the scale a little bit bigger and I think you will earn enough points for Arch Rank. Also I like how you used the entire area around u including the ocean. Keep it up! It's really good its just not completely there yet for the rank your after. But what I do think is you have enough points here for a Apprentice Rank which I will apply.

Keep up the good work! One Day Arch next LC <3

[freakboy31]

congrats, i give you 8 in uniqueness because there were islands before (even before my CP/EC islands build) but i look forward for better. Like Steph said, for a shipwrecked island, it has to be a little realistic and put some background in it. Aim that for next rank, mizjr.