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Im applying for: Architect

Project name: Mediville

How to get there: /warp Mediville

Brief desc.: What was going to be a castle turned into a Nice Mini castle with a small village by it.

Screenies: None

Miss anything? Be sure to Look upstairs

Uniqueness on our server: Does it look like something already built?
4. Its a stone castle, and we have a lot of those

Beauty: Does it look nice to look at?
4. Not much detail, simple design

Execution: Is it well made, are corridors and rooms built to the correct sizing?
4. Spacious inside, however pretty empty

Scale: The larger and more grand the build is the higher it scores
4. Medium size at best.

4+4+4+4 = 16, not enough to earn Architect im afraid, but you have earned apprentice. To help you get an idea of what you need to build in order to get architect, take a look at previous projects and get an idea off that. Keep trying, I know you can do it.

Thanks for the opportunity to rate your build!

Uniqueness on our server: Does it look like something already built?
1 = Not unique, 10 = Very very unique

*3* This isn't terribly unique. The one long side arm is interesting, but there are many castle-type things on our server.


Beauty: Does it look nice to look at?
1 = Ugly, 10 = Really really beautiful

*5* I like the iron bar details and the general effect is pleasant. However, you relied far too heavily on glowstone and there aren't any surroundings (mountains, trees, grass, flowers, etc). It looks nice, but I know you and know it could look better if more time were put in.

Execution: Is it well made, are corridors and rooms built to the correct sizing?
1 = Built by Refugees, 10 = Built by Master Craftsmen

*3* There is a ton of unused space in the main room. The corridor to the sleeping quarters was a little cramped. I would also raise the roof a bit more.

Scale: The larger and more grand the build is the higher it scores
1 = Golf-Ball Size Settlement, 10 = Entire City

*3* Given that this is for architect, I just don't think it is big enough or utilizes space well enough. I would check out some of the things built by iRandomness, skoch 26, etc first.

3+5+3+3= 14

I submitted this anyway because I worked hard on it :/

dels is prettier ^^

Since Skoch gave 16 and Del gave 14 I'm just going to split the difference and say this entry is 15. So he has earned Apprentice.