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Apprentice App -Cupagreent

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 12:13 am
by reddenfox
I'm applying for: Apprentice

Project Name: City of Penumbra (ongoing build)

How do we get there?: /warp Penumbra

Brief Description: The City of the one-time inhabitants of the Neather, head for the western exit to access
all current buildings

Screenshots:
penumba 2.png
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Penumbra 1.png
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Anything we might miss when we see it in game?:
The white arrow in the spawn arena points to cardinal North
Check Behind the vines
Try opening the fridges in the appartements (buttons on their sides)

-Redd

Re: Apprentice App -Cupagreent

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 12:44 am
by alexcarlson
Uniqueness: 6 - It's a town and many people have been making towns, this is different though. I see a completley new style into this.

Beauty: 5 - It is half-sexy. The buildings could've been a little more detailed.

Execution: 4.5 - Most of the rooms and buildings are kinda empty, but I see no mistakes in correct sizes.

Scale: 5 - Fair enough.

Total: 20.5

Congratulations, my friend. You've earned Apprentice. May Pri shine down on you. :) (WOOT! MY FIRST RATING, BITCHES.)

Re: Apprentice App -Cupagreent

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 12:48 am
by reddenfox
Thanks Alex and your comments are Fair and I will take them into consideration :D

Re: Apprentice App -Cupagreent

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 2:02 pm
by tomisafish
I have got to say, I love the art gallery. I think it looks beautiful and was entertaining to go through. If you were to keep on expanding this while retaining the same (or higher) level of workmanship I would say you have a fair chance of getting Architect some time.