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The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect
My Game Name is:Goose_Box
My Project is called:Jupiter city
To get to my project: x- -2629 y- 83 z- -14511
A brief description of my project:A Part of the town Aleckto republic by afroorbz, this city is a modern one with tall and colorful buildings.( Gray skyscraper WIP)
Three mandatory screenshots(plus three more):
http://imgur.com/CFOdIgo
http://imgur.com/pIR5LG3
http://imgur.com/l3QZuzb
http://imgur.com/6fwKCoS
http://imgur.com/cbLQdRr
http://imgur.com/CPtvwFD

Uniqueness: 6
Beauty: 5
Execution: 4
Scale: 5
For a total of 20 points.
Now I'll explain my rating to you. I've seen the screenshots, and looked at it in game. These are nice buildings to start but they're all very empty. The 2 white clay ones that are connected have no floors, and lifts that go no where. There is a door missing to a zombie attack on the sandstone/lime green glass building, and stairs that can't be used without jumping. Also blocks that close off a doorway. This makes it awkward to get through and that lowers your execution points. You need to finish up the walk way to the buildings and maybe work the land around the area more. I'm not sure if your vision for the place is to have modern and natural land together or not.
I adore the Jupiter planet statue outside.
Overall a great start, it just needs more land work, furnishings, and a clearer picture of how the town should be laid out. Keep at it!
You can reapply after 7 days. Can't wait to see version 2!

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