Page 1 of 1

v0nngamer apprentice rank form

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2016 5:01 pm
by v0nngamerrocks
The Rank I'm applying for is: apprentice
My Game Name is: v0nngamer
My Project is called: airplane
To get to my project: x-15608 y178 11221
A brief description of my project: its an airplane that has 1st and economy class
Three mandatory screenshots https://drive.google.com/folderview?id= ... sp=sharing

Re: v0nngamer apprentice rank form

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2016 5:21 pm
by Tomoki
im glad youre finally applying for a rank, vonn. im not sure if youll get it, but it looks pretty nice XP good luck!

Re: v0nngamer apprentice rank form

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2016 7:14 pm
by blackeyeddog
I had a look ingame this is not worth apprentice. Make it bigger and add more detail and it's on it's way.
You can reapply in 7 days.

Re: v0nngamer apprentice rank form

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2016 8:17 pm
by jackerdelta
I'd suggest you could make a fleet of planes, or something like that.

Re: v0nngamer apprentice rank form

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2016 10:56 pm
by Stephanie
Shoulda added a few pictures of the outside, inside looks cute though.

Re: v0nngamer apprentice rank form

Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2016 4:06 pm
by wesleyearl123
I think a way you might want to improve this build would be showing more interior/ outerior designing, maybe like random spotted clouds since it's in the sky, maybe a logo (You could do this optionally, but maybe your plane is too small for a logo), you could make chairs have a arm stand , and lastly you could use the basic depth detailing for both interior/ outeior. Good luck v0n, hopefully you get apprentice from this (from all what I said, I'm 99% sure you might want to talk to multiple people to improve)