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TheDemiPrince's Architect Application

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2015 3:38 am
by Demi
The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect

My Game Name is: TheDemiPrince

My Project is called: Mansion, Sweet Mansion!

To get to my project: The coords. are x: -4910.2956 y: 64.00 z: 18149.688

A brief description of my project: This project is basically a mansion(as the name imply's) and is really my dream house in real life...more or less. I also added a farm, flower garden, horse stable, pool and jacuzzi. Hope you all like it! :D

Three mandatory screenshots:

Re: TheDemiPrince's Architect Application

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2015 7:37 am
by Pri
Those coordinates didn't work for me but I was able to find the place from your set home.

I quite like this build externally, internally though it's a bit of a mess. Ceilings are too low in some rooms, too high in others. It could do with some reconfiguring inside. The garden is nice, I like the fence, and I like the pool area. So lets get to the rating:

Beauty: 7/10
Uniqueness: 6/10
Execution: 6/10
Scale: 8/10

Total: 27

This isn't enough for Architect, but it is for Apprentice. I would recommend reconfiguring the inside of the house to get the execution and beauty higher, three points there and you'll be at 30/40 which is enough for Architect.

I have set you to Apprentice, you may submit either this or a different build in 7 days from now.

Re: TheDemiPrince's Architect Application

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2015 3:01 pm
by Demi
Ok, thanks Pri :D