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The Rank I'm applying for is: Epic Crafter
My Game Name is: Daloria
My Project is called: Aviamora
To get to my project: Ask me (I will most likely be there anyway) or for those who can get to my homes I have a home set there named Aviamora
A brief description of my project: It began as a house in the ocean which I planned to expand and make a small village around.... Nothing ever turns out like I plan! I do have plans to expand the area and ultimately make it into a wonderful city,
Three mandatory screenshots:
http://i.imgur.com/eUzsDdN.png (Thank you to Moz for this great one)
http://prntscr.com/7p564b
http://prntscr.com/7p56r8

*hugs*

This is a nice build but I can't give it Epic Crafter for a few reasons. But before I explain those lets get to the rating.

Uniqueness: 8 - Only a few builds in a similar style to this
Beauty: 10 - Very eye pleasing build
Execution: 6 - I'll explain why this is low further down
Scale: 7 - It is quite large, vertically but also quite empty

Total: 31 Points, this is enough for Architect.

The reason I've scored execution low is because the build lacks any way to access many floors apart from flying which isn't a normal mechanic of minecraft. It's not something you can do in Survival naturally. When we look at builds we like to see well made staircases or other normal ways that don't require creative mode features (like flying) to reach different floors. I think you could probably fix this using Craftbook or our Telepads features which if well integrated and made pretty would increase the execution score.

As for scale, the build takes up a lot of space but it's very hollow. There's not much density inside, the hallways are mostly barren. We've given high scores to tower builds in the past but they were filled with many rooms, many interesting things on all the floors, this feels very empty.

So overall I like the build, I wouldn't take it down or start over, I'd go through it and just make some improvements, add more objects to the floors, add some accessibility features and perhaps expand it horizontally with some auxiliary buildings.

You're free to submit this build again in 7 days and I have set you to Architect rank