Architect Application

[kody306]

The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect
My Game Name is: YuriNeykonan
My Project is called: Ruined Tree City
To get to my project: /warp kodyforest
A brief description of my project: A town made in the ruins of an older city, in which the new inhabitants hollowed out rotting trees in order to build their homes. (Town is mostly made by my old account, Kody306, but I want the rank to go to my new one, YuriNeykonan ^.^)
Three mandatory screenshots:

[Riven]

ok, to get architect you need at least 30
after seeing i ingame here is my rating

Uniqueness:7
i dont think we have had a village built out of rotten trees before

Beauty:3
it really needs some work, most of it feels half finished. the complete lack of any roofs for example made everything feel incomplete, i know its supposed to be made from old trees but that doesnt preclude the inhabitants from building a roof
also the landscaping needs work, its all flat. with this being built in creative you have the opportunity to go all out and i honestly just dont see it

Execution:4
it doesnt have all the things i would expect to see in a town, 9 buildings does not a town make.
also like i said, it looks incomplete. the town wall for example, i know its supposed to be ruins but where was the gate originally? my advice for building ruins is to build the complete build first, make sure it works, then go back and ruin it.

Scale:4
this is really small for a town, prob closer to a village but even so it could be bigger.

score:18

so not architect this time, but work on what i mentioned and resubmit in a month,


check out these successful app's if you want some more idea's of what were expecting

http://www.mxpulse.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=4083
http://www.mxpulse.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=4012
http://www.mxpulse.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=3969