Builderscraper Apprentice Application

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LoudClarinet
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Builderscraper Apprentice Application

Thu Dec 12, 2013 1:43 pm

The rank I'm applying for is : Apprentice
My game name is : builderscraper
My Project is called: SV Horse Haven
How to get to my build: coordinates: X:1388 Y:70 Z:-7591 (horsehaven) (survival)
A brief description of my project: It is a trading vessel.
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Daigle
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Re: Builderscraper Apprentice Application

Thu Dec 12, 2013 3:39 pm

Uniqueness: 3 - It is a classic wooden ship era design, nicely done but not very unique
Beauty: 5 - I like the the use of the different woods. The ship could use a couple corrections (see below) & perhaps more details on the main deck
Execution: 5 - all the materials used here are very easy and inexpensive to gather
Scale: 3 - there's much bigger ships I've seen done but also a few smaller ones.

Total: 16

My main issue with this boat is the captain's wheel is not on "the bridge" on top of the captains quarters where it is always located on this type of vessel. Consequently, the sail would need to be raised higher so the captain can see the water over the bow and under the sail when standing on the bridge. The masts on these ships are usually way taller and there is always at least 2 masts. Anyway, I think this build is apprentice worthy as it is now.
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LoudClarinet
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Re: Builderscraper Apprentice Application

Thu Dec 12, 2013 4:05 pm

Thank you for grading my ship :)
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Daigle
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Re: Builderscraper Apprentice Application

Fri Dec 13, 2013 2:19 pm

Oh, and just a side note, I think it looks even better in Vanilla then in the texture pack you have in your screen shots. The woods blend better in Vanilla.
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Re: Builderscraper Apprentice Application

Sat Dec 14, 2013 7:13 am

Apprentice rank applied, congrats!
LoudClarinet
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Re: Builderscraper Apprentice Application

Sat Dec 14, 2013 7:33 am

Thank you :D
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Re: Builderscraper Apprentice Application

Sat Dec 14, 2013 7:37 am

oh btw daigle note taken :)

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