Page 1 of 1

Re: Taakana Architect App

Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2013 10:42 pm
by RamboNol
Good luck! I'd say its looking nice but I don't know what arch looks like (I have 6 failed attempts at it) so I can't help give an idea of if its arch or not, either way luck is nice!

Re: Taakana Architect App

Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2013 10:59 pm
by Db696
Uniqueness: 7, Although it is a house, not many people upload entire estates.

Beauty: 7, I loved the land choice and biome, Everything just seems like it belongs there. The building is really well made on the outside.

Execution: 4, Here is where you are lacking. Although the rooms and everything are a great size I feel like a bunch of the colors just dont fit and there is just stuff thrown around in some of the rooms. Try making things a bit more uniform and giving each room its own purpose, Also if you where building within a texture pack I recommend using default because we do not use texturepacks in rating. The barn could also be a bit more multi textured, the roof should be a different material.

Scale: 5, not much more can be said about the size, its a good size for a Villa-esque estate. Although you could add a bit more foliage to make it seem more complete.

This grants you 23 points, touch up on your Execution and you will definitely get Architect. If any of the staff feel this was unfairly rated please feel free to do your own revision.

You have earned Apprentice in the meantime, keep up the good work!

Re: Taakana Architect App

Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2013 11:07 pm
by SJL1999
Try to get a screenshot of what the whole villa looks like from the outside. I have already seen it and my sister went to Italy last summer it looks pretty accurate.

Re: Taakana Architect App

Posted: Fri Dec 06, 2013 4:50 pm
by freakboy31
Db696 wrote: You have earned Apprentice in the meantime, keep up the good work!

He already has Apprentice rank. Nothing new has changed.

His previous application:
http://www.mxpulse.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=3193