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SJL1999 Build Application

Wed Oct 23, 2013 8:35 pm

The Rank I'm applying for is : Apprentice
My In game name is : SJL1999
My project is called : Aircraft carrier
To get to my project : Close to Wintersong spawn or just tp.
A brief description of my project : A Aircraft carrier with a life boat on the side with a decorated inside.
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Re: SJL1999 Build Application

Wed Oct 23, 2013 8:36 pm

also if anyone could help come up with a name for it, it would be a good help.
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Re: SJL1999 Build Application

Wed Oct 23, 2013 8:48 pm

Moved to Rank App forum
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Re: SJL1999 Build Application

Thu Oct 24, 2013 3:17 pm

Uniqueness: 5 - I haven't seen many boats as applications in recent months
Beauty: 4 - It does look very plain on the outside and on the inside there is a very small amount of decoration on the inside.
Execution: 4 - The building of this is alright, it isn't super square and it has some variation to it.
Scale: 4 - For being an air craft carrier it is very small, if you made a bigger version the scale would go up.

4+4+4+5 = 17 17/15 Yep well done on Apprentice
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Re: SJL1999 Build Application

Thu Oct 24, 2013 5:51 pm

It should be called the MMS (Minecraftia Military Ship) Phillips.
Just a suggestion to satisfy my OCD: I'd recommend placing the torches in a more realistic location rather than on the runway.
This is really cool and I have not seen any ships like this on the server yet!
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Re: SJL1999 Build Application

Thu Oct 24, 2013 6:36 pm

i put the torches their because a lot of mobs were spawning
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Re: SJL1999 Build Application

Fri Oct 25, 2013 3:48 am

A like the tables. For what its worth, to be on the right scale of an aircraft carrier I think it should be 4-5 times larger. Good start!
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Re: SJL1999 Build Application

Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:18 pm

Can Pri look at it
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Re: SJL1999 Build Application

Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:54 pm

Pri may not respond instantly as he has a new daughter, but I'm sure somebody will get to you within the next couple of days. I'd say worth apprentice for sure :) You could make this into a more unique idea with the same water build concept, and on a larger scale, and I'm sure you could get architect! A tip that I learned though, detail is all about building with stairs and colour contrast. lol
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Re: SJL1999 Build Application

Fri Nov 08, 2013 9:46 am

Apprentice rank applied, congratulations!

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