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Rank: Architect
In Game Name: Rambo_Nol
Project Name: Public Resort/Secret government testing facility
To Get To It: Survival server at x=-337 y=63 z=7977
Description: To the public its just a cool business tower with a garden on the bottom at a resort, but in reality the other floors are testing facilities on other biomes for top secret research.

Oh the suspense!!

Not exactly "top secret" when theres huge ass windows

You're close... but as of now it's not quite enough...go for more detail.

Alright thanks, i'll get to it.

i like it i just looks like biomes in a tube u made this on creative for your 2nd app didnt you?

Nah of course not, but I did keep the biome idea. It is a tower this time, something more appealing to the eye hopefully, and biomes are on each level. Plus I added some other stuff to make it like a resort, which I plan on adding to and fixing for CP.

RamboNol wrote:Nah of course not, but I did keep the biome idea. It is a tower this time, something more appealing to the eye hopefully, and biomes are on each level. Plus I added some other stuff to make it like a resort, which I plan on adding to and fixing for CP.

You got to get Architect before City Planner. Think about whats going on now not too much of whats in the future because if you think of the future too much then it most likely wont come because you didn't pay attention to whats going on now.
Also you need more detail in it. It just looks like a stone-brick and glass tower. Make it more unique and spontaneous but not to the point where it looks bad. Also add more color and i don't mean just add in some wool or stained clay and say "But I added color" it needs to flow with the build but look nice. Not trying to criticize you and the build just trying to help you be a better builder and to think about what you build don't just build something and apply every week. Take time and add more effort.

Take time and add more effort.

^What he said

Can I by any chance get a rating so I know what to work on if that is ok? Thanks (that was intended rudely)