Rambo_Nol's Architect Application 4

[RamboNol]

Rank: Architect
In Game Name: Rambo_Nol
Project name: Protoss Base
To get to it: Creative server, /warp flat2, X=-25285 Y=70 Z=3820
Description: A Protoss Nexus from the PC game StarCraft 2, slightly modified. It is an Alien center structure of a base used to gather resources and build workers to build structures. Google for reference to structures. I also added detail as Pri suggested, and added a few more structures including a Forge, Fleet Beacon, Pylon, and a shooting Photon cannon. I must also add that it is a LOT more amazing looking at it in game.

[Pri]

See when I look at this all I can think is, it's a big gold thing. It doesn't look very neat to me. I'm finding it hard to rate this anything above Apprentice.

[RamboNol]

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Is there ANY mod or admin that knows what they are looking at...? You cant judge it if you don't know..... I don't know how people that don't know see it, but when I or somebody else looks at it who knows what it is, all it is pure beauty.

[Pri]

I've never played Starcraft

[RamboNol]

Judging on all of the advice I've been given, I decided to build something on SURVIVAL that everyone will understand, since nobody seems to get all my other tastes.... I'll have a build ready for you by next Sunday LATEST.

[Morronicine]

tbh, protoss is the least detailed of the 3 races. you'd have better luck with a terran or zerg base

[T_Balla]

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Is there ANY mod or admin that knows what they are looking at...? You cant judge it if you don't know..... I don't know how people that don't know see it, but when I or somebody else looks at it who knows what it is, all it is pure beauty.

That's really in the eye of the beholder, and even if YOU think it looks nice, others also have opinions. I agree with Pri, StarCraft base or giant gold structure, either or fits the proper description, but this is just something that does not seem appealing to me. Perhaps if you made an interior to it rather than having a fancy "shell" of a build, it would be worth it.
Keep it up.

[Kles266]

what did u add to it i see no change?

[T_Balla]

He added yellow wool to give it definition, but it is still a hunk-o-gold.

[freakboy31]

You should build something like this:




And I've never played Starcraft.



What you've build doesn't have sharpness of those corner parts so that's why it looks dull. (/critic)