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In game name: Evohluxx
Project: Serenity
Desc:my town serenity i have put hard work intoi got apprentice on my last application but left out a few of my builds along with townmates that might sway your opinion along with horse stable buisness tower and a monument (maybe to pri?)
how to get to serenity:
/town spawn serenity (mod+ only)
/tpa evohluxx
or on dynamap blue flag serenity
Note: i did have help on the builds but these builds were my idea and i put most of work into them.

Uniqueness: 6
Skyscrapers aren't very unique to this server however the other two structures are somewhat interesting. The third one for sure, the second one is just an altered cube.

Beauty: 4
There's not much beauty for these builds because while the third one does look interesting they all seem hollow, Especially the second one which we can clearly see it is.

Execution: 5
While they are big, they lack some details that would make for the builds to look good. Perhaps a bit Rushed.

Scale: 7
They are fairly big, and counting the surrounding town it has quite the considerable size.

6+4+5+7 = 22 Which puts you at apprentice Still


Try going for more details for the structures and find a way to properly display them that makes them look natural. For example the second one. Try adding a bit of land around it, enough to make it look natural and not a floating cobble square

for the 2nd one i uploaded thewron photo thats while it is hollow and im still making the dual room hallway and i need an idea for a statue

Indeed, I'm not saying you can't make it, you're very close to it be sure to add those things that you mentioned!

Keep up the good work!

thanks psi im wondering ifi could get some tips?
or help

pri if u see this message i messed up this one with diffferent screen shots and i left out a couple so im going to resumbit one when i finish up in a couple of days. im working hard for it

Be sure to do so Evo