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Apprentice application - Razzicle

Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 5:56 pm
by Razzicle
The Rank I'm applying for is: Apprentice

My Game Name is: Razzicle

My Project is called: Desert home

To get to my project: It's in survival... co-ords are:
x = -1726
y = 67
z = -5631

A brief description of my project: My first build on the server and i'm going to live here for now and maybe start a town. Just wondered if it was apprentice worthy :D (also, furniture has not really been added yet but hoped i could get the rank without it?)

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-Razzicle

Re: Apprentice application - Razzicle

Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 7:10 pm
by eXhound
I like the color mix. Purple and sandstone, would've never thought of that!
So in decoration of the outside, I really like it, even the details on the top of the structure are really nicely thought through!
The entrance is also really cool!
I would say this is apprentice worhty, even wihtout the furniture, but if you do not get apprentice, make sure to furnish it, and the just repost it with furniture, as pri/VodkaDK might want it to be furnished before he gives you apprentice...
If I could rate, I would score it a good amount, so don't worry about the score, just make sure to keep in mind... *Furnish*
That's all!
Good luck! :D

EDIT: I did not notice the balcony at first, but that iron fence ruins it all. It doesn't really match. Change that to something more of a sandstone theme :D

Re: Apprentice application - Razzicle

Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 11:34 pm
by Riven
i went and looked this one over ingame

Uniqueness:4
dessert houses are uncommon but not very rare.
Beauty:5
i this its well done, i like the mix of materials and it looks nice
Execution:3
its well done, rooms are believable sizes, it does need furnished though
Scale:4
as far as single houses go its a good size

Thats apprentice for ya.

i would advise you to furnish the house. i think the iron bars fir nicely and dont take away from the overall build.
i also advise adding some doors to get onto the balcony

Re: Apprentice application - Razzicle

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 10:37 am
by Pri
Rank Applied.

Re: Apprentice application - Razzicle

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 12:12 pm
by freakboy31
Your build deserves it, congratulations.

Re: Apprentice application - Razzicle

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 10:10 pm
by eXhound
Congrats!
Your deserve it! :D