City planner application *eXhound*

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City planner application *eXhound*

Thu Feb 07, 2013 9:16 pm

The Rank I'm applying for is: City Planner
My Game Name is: eXhound
My Project is called: Southern Tree Arch Village
To get to my project: Warp to /sta
A brief description of my project: A town, on water, which consists of a market, a town hall, small cottages, a bridge structure, and a arch going over the bridge made of wood and leaves.
Multiple mandatory screenshots:
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Grass details:
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Day overview:
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Night overview:
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Public Market:
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Fountain Garden:
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Town hall, outer view:
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Town hall, inner view:
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The bridge & arch:
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The back of the arch:
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Last edited by eXhound on Thu Feb 07, 2013 9:45 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: City planner application *eXhound*

Thu Feb 07, 2013 9:23 pm

Uniqueness: 9
I have not seen something like this before. This is like a huge tree-arch stretching over from a temple to old town of some kind.

Beauty: 8 The way you've placed trees, lights grass etc around the town makes it look great. Not just a plain road but something that really catches your eye. Allthough there are some small mistakes that drag the points down.

Execution: 9 This looks like a city, or a resort. The pathways with the small grass patches make it look a bit old and gives more points in details. You've used different types of blocks here so therefore i give you the 9.

Scale: 9 This is pretty big and detailed

8 +8 + 9 + 9 = 35 Points! This is my first review so if any other mod wants to rate it again it's fine for me.
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Re: City planner application *eXhound*

Thu Feb 07, 2013 9:27 pm

Unigueness: 8
Like I said last time its very nice and original

Beauty: 9
It really stands out at night time and its a really nice structure with ALOT to see

Execution: 9 Like nor said it looks like a city or a resort. the thing looks like it was abandoned and it has a nice viarity of blocks.

Scale: 9 this thing is Really big and well detailed I really enjoyed exploring it and its wonders.

9 x 3 + 8 = 35! If i'm agreed with here you get city planner (hopefully I am so I can mark this as my first successful rating) if not im sorry :(

I would like to say It would of been better if you showed the structure at night
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Re: City planner application *eXhound*

Thu Feb 07, 2013 11:35 pm

I don't know, It seems like just a whole bunch of copied structures with not much variety.
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Re: City planner application *eXhound*

Fri Feb 08, 2013 1:48 am

Still, the order in the city gives it uniqueness. I advocate for giving eXhound this rank.
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Re: City planner application *eXhound*

Fri Feb 08, 2013 2:20 am

This is not City Planner worthy yet. Keep building on to it.
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Re: City planner application *eXhound*

Fri Feb 08, 2013 5:12 am

What is it missing, because it's missing something that is making it worse. Could I know what to be able to proceed to make the build better?
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Re: City planner application *eXhound*

Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:34 am

Yes, it's good but you need a perfect 10 in Scale criteria. That's the main requirement for a City Planner so build it better and remember to build variety of builds in your build.
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Re: City planner application *eXhound*

Fri Feb 08, 2013 11:57 am

I'm not staff but if I were to give an opinion, I would say add more different buildings, like the ones in the middle. Around that is just a bunch of copied houses. In general this is very nice though :)
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Re: City planner application *eXhound*

Fri Feb 08, 2013 6:22 pm

In my humble opinion, a city should be built on a grand scale with a variety of buildings and functions, so I would suggest that you stick with this build and add to it, making this a part of a larger complex. Enlarge it by, say two times its size.
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