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Egexe's rank application
Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:03 pm
by Egexe
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The Rank I'm applying for is: City Planner or at least Architect
My Game Name is: egexe
My Project is called: Athel Loren
To get to my project: x 2198,48412 and z 298,41310
A brief description of my project: A city inside a forest
Three mandatory screenshots:
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Re: Egexe's rank application
Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:04 pm
by Egexe
sorry about that one picture up there
Re: Egexe's rank application
Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:20 pm
by Lynxious
Uniqueness - 8 - The theme is interesting and unique, I like how it is seemingly all on a tree (log flooring)
Beauty - 6 - I do like your style, however I'm not a fan of all the glowstone lighting, I feel like it's kind of an eye sore. Also I would like to see bigger buildings, all of your buildings and your arena look a bit squished, I think you could convey your own style better and put more beauty into the build if you make it bigger.
Execution - 6 - I think you could put a little more time into this and make it a bit larger
Scale - 6 - It's overall not that large of a build, all of your buildings are quite small. Try to make larger builds so that you can apply more detail in your build.
Total = 26/40
Don't worry, you've got some good ideas going for you. I guarantee if you keep at it and spend some good time into your build you'll achieve architect.
