Nick8010 director application!

[Nick8010]

IGN: Nick8010

Title of the Video: Renegades Server!

Which server took place: Creative - Survival

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XgczBHlpNEc

Very short description about your video: It is just a easy server rewiev, i tought the server needed a few more members, and why not try making a application! I almost know i wont get it, but if i do il be so happy

[freakboy31]

Uniqueness: 6
- Server reviews are common and I don't find it very unique.
Representation: 7
- One thing you pointed out is where to start traveling. It only lacks when you start teleporting.
Execution: 5
- I know lag really lags but the editing isn't bad. What rates the execution 5 is the wrong choice of music. It is only my opinion because the children might like your choice of music.
Length: 2 (30 second gets one point)

20/40 points. It doesn't worth Director but a re-application is welcome. I hope the judge will be Vodka, Dum, Rick or Alexcarlson.

[Dumskalle123]

I'll give it my rating too,

U: 2 - As fraky said, server reviews are very common and not at all unique.

R: 5 - Meh, it's a server review - it contains what a server review is supposed to contain.

E: 2 - Fog on tiny isn't at all very appealing, nor is your choice of music. I couldn't blame you for the lag, but I'll blame you for the GIANT Bandicam watermark at the top of the screen.

L: 2 - A very, very short server review. 1:50 is not at all substantial enough to get you Director.

11/40 points - I'll advice you not to do a server review as your Director application, though server reviews are very appreciated, they are not worthy of Director in my opinion. You could try to give machinimas a try.

[Pri]

I gotta be honest nick this video is not very good. I'll give you some constructive critism:

The music was annoying and terrible, it became even more annoying as it noticeably looped.
You have a Bandicam watermark on the top of the video
Your render distance is set quite low so there is fog and in general the video quality isn't good.
The video itself isn't very smooth, the fps is quite low, possibly due to using Bandicam or your PC I don't know.

The content of the video is just showing some random stuff on the server but theres no context. At one point you show some kind of underground subway which looked cool but you didn't say who built it, where it is, what it's for etc

Don't get discouraged because I know that making videos is not easy I've made a few and none of mine are anything special they are just basic and short. So keep at it and think about investing in a microphone if you want to do another review video, although I would suggest making a more story driven video if your intention is to get director.

[Nick8010]

Thank u guys! I think im going to save up and get some real equipment! Im liking the hole critisism thing from u Pri because it help alot!!!

-Nick