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I'm applying for: Architect

In-Game Name: Penguin9999

Project Name: Majesty Theater

How do we get there?: /warp majestytheater

Brief Description: A theater all prepared for a performance of "Minecraft the Musical" (No I don't know what it's about ) Backstage quadruples as backstage, apartments, a restaurant (Grande Restaurant) and as a rec room for actors, actresses, directors, and the rest of the crew.

Screenshots:

Anything we might miss when we see it in game?: Please make sure you go back stage and climb the ladder to each different floor. I spent a lot of time on each floor and it would be a shame if they got over-looked.

By the way:
The sheep you may see roaming around is named Herbert.
He's the greatest actor the world has ever seen.

That sheep is great at what he does.
UNIQUENESS: Does it look like something already built?
Score: 8
I don't see many theaters 'round these parts.

BEAUTY: Does it actually look nice?
Score:6
The whole place has alot of negative space. Also, the theater lacks "flavor". Needs some "salt". Spice it up a bit, and this can get better.

EXECUTION: Is it well-built?
Score: 6
It's kinda blocky. You changed the exterior shape,which helps. All of your balconies, though, are lacking. They don't even have fences, and they are really small. The ones in the theater don't even have a way to get to them. Your block choice is also kinda limited.

SIZE: Is it big?
Score:9
It's pretty big.(Yes, I know what I'm saying.)

THE TOTAL:29

Well, you came really, really close to your goal of Architect, which requires 30 points. But, in the mean time, you get Apprentice for your work. Try spicing the theater up more, and you'll get that one point and get Arch and life will be awesomeriffic.

Xeloras told me to do a rerate for this so thats what im doing.
Below is Xeloras' rate except edited with my decision.

UNIQUENESS: Does it look like something already built?
Score: 7
There isnt really any theatres in the server, thats why i like this.

BEAUTY: Does it actually look nice?
Score:4
It looks nice, but the over use of gold blocks really doesnt help.

EXECUTION: Is it well-built?
Score: 4
The whole thing is a giant iron block essentially, and some floors seem way too open.

SIZE: Is it big?
Score:6
Even though it looks rather huge from the outside it is all just a bunch of empty rooms

This earns you 22 points, enough for apprentice!

Well.....
Thanks guys for all your input.
I really appreciate it
Yes I am disappointed and yes I did get my hopes up,
but I do understand where you guys are coming from.
Thanks again for all the time you spent rating my application and for your feedback,
Penguin9999

Dude not alot of people get arch on there first submitted thing. Your get there