City Planner Application, Attempt #2

[Public3nemy11]

The rank I'm applying for: City Planner

My in game name: Public_3nemy_11

My project is called: 3nemy Arena

To get to my project: /warp 3nemy_Arena

A brief description of my project: This was a long project that I found fun to complete. This project was able to fulfill my love to hockey. I hope I'm not the only one who finds this fun!

Side info: It's dark because if I had more lights, the ice would melt. Sorry for the darkness!

Three mandatory screenshots:

[Pri]

The detail is not high enough for City Planner, sorry

This is a rank that requires incredible levels of detail, what you've shown here feels very empty with empty space and not much block variety in floors, walls and other large open areas.

Work on this and you may re-submit in one week.

[jackerdelta]

Uniqueness:7
I've seen quite a few cities on creative but none of the cities really show the theme you're showing.
Beauty: 6
All the blocks in the ice skating ring are BORING there is no pattern and it just looks blank, STAIRS AND PATTERNS ARE YOUR FRIENDS!
Execution: 6
Not to bad my friend. MORE DETAIL MAN!
Scale: 8.5
The airport and ice skating ring and park thing all lead to you getting an 8.5
TOTAL SCORE: 27.5~28
- Judged this out of game and this is a jack rating so don't take it personally.
-PPS- your welcome if I helped and if not sorry.
-PPPS JACKDELTA
-PPPPS I am just anooying you now